My Family Publishing

WALT organise our ideas in our writing into basic paragraphs so that we are only talking about one thing or person at a time

My family

In my family I have two brothers and one sister and me and my mum and dad and one pet.

My dad’s name is Mete.  He is 37.  He works at ITM.  He used to play rugby and he also likes fishing.

My mum’s name is Carly she likes good kids.  She likes beaches.  She is 37.

My sister is 3.  She is a bully and bossy.  She likes the colour purple.

My little brother is 7 months.  He likes toys.

My older brother is Keelan, he is 11 years old.  He’s a bully and his favourite colour is red.


Reflection:
Two things I did well were organising my ideas into paragraphs and writing my keywords.  Next time I want to write more and my brother and remember more full stops.